Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Pretention

(Note: Lovely, this is it!)

I was cleaning my room the other day and came across this poem I have written years ago:
Please speak
Break down the walls
Cry with your heart
Let me know your soul
Stop the pretenses
I need the real you
Dissolve the air of madness
Sweat on your own
Do not wear the mask
Let me hold you in fault
Be the same man
Forever remain human
Let me reach out
Wipe away the gloom
Laugh without inhibition
Anger need not be hidden
Lay down in my arms
Tell me the truth
Please speak
Before I leave you

The last time I wrote a poem was years ago. I only do it when I feel a burning (burning talaga e noh?!) emotion about something. Well, usually that burning emotion is about love. Back then, blogging was something unheard of although chatting was already a way of life.

Now, I do not write poems as passionately as I used to. Probably because of my work load and probably because I haven't found a reason to. I, however, blog when I feel strongly about something.

Today, I actually feel strongly about something. Unfortunately, I do not have the right words for it. I do not know how to express it. I am afraid that if I did, the fantasy would end as abruptly as it had begun. So I'm doing this the hard way:







John Lloyd I love you!!!

nyahahahaha! 'kala mo seryoso na no?!



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10 comments:

  1. wow ate this is it..
    hanep eto ba talaga yun parang hindi hehe,,,:)
    teka jlc huwaaaaaat may kung ano nangaasara ka hehe..:)
    lagot na magkakabakbakan na naman kayo hehe..dahil sa pag banggit ng pangalan ng kras ata ng lahat maliban saken hehe(belat)
    anyway ate matagal na ba ito ung tipong brown na ung papel nung mahalukay mo sa closet mo hehe..:)
    uyyyyyyyyyyyyyy..hugs

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  2. di naman...medyo kailangan mo lang hawakan maige dahil anytime pwedeng maging abo hehehehe

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  3. lol @ JLC aylabyu! i wish lio could read this. i bet he'd again be freakin' furious! hahaha!

    oist rhona, ang ganda ng poem mo ah! ramdam na ramdam ang burning emotions :)

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  4. ganyan ko kamahal si Lio, nais kong sirain ang araw nya....jan man lang makaganti ako nyahahahaha

    thanks naman....actually nagdadalawang isip nga ako if ipo-post ko e...i'm kinda shy e, you know (prang c Manny Paquiao lang a)....baka kasi malait nang mga poem critics

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  5. Grabe naman ang poem na to.

    Tama ka kikay, saka ka lang nakakagawa ng magandang po-wem kapag may pinaghuhugutan kang emosyon..

    Nice meeting you in blogsphere!:p

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  6. ditto!

    kaya nga minsan naawa ako sa mga kilalang poets na nakapagpalimbag ng daan daang poems....either sobrang emotional ang buhay nila o uso na ang outsourcing noon

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  7. naiimagine ko na ang galit ni Lio sa post na 'to..

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  8. ayaw nyang basahin yan...hula ko may crush talaga yun kay john lloyd e, hinde lang nya maamin hehehehe

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  9. i love the poem!
    i wish i cud write that well.
    pag sumusulat kasi ako ng poem, nagiging corny! hehe

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  10. naku monding, may mga poems din ko na uber corny...

    make it flow from your heart...don't worry about the grammar or what language you would use...ang mahalaga, ma-express mo

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